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Tuesday, July 3, 2018

the foot print

As the huge hairy yeti shattered the ground all that was left was ginormous footprints and hair from the yetis foot. The next morning a man called Tom he and his family were going to the beautiful beach. Then his kids “shoated dad”!!! So Tom came over he stared for so long his eyes watered with pain then he decided to blenk. He decided to investigate the huge footprint. Then his wife shoated ¨WE'RE GOING HOME¨!!! I am going to stay back. Suit yourself come on kids. “Mmm i wonder what made the footprint¨? It looks like a yetis foot or it could be a ogers foot. So Tom cared on to see where the footprint lead after a few minutes he meat a upset yeti. After a few seconds tom said ¨what is wrong¨? Then the yeti spock ¨last night a huge ogre attacked me¨¨ that must be horabile i will come back tomorrow¨. So tom went back the very next morning Tom came back with a oversized blanket and a ginormous pillow. When he got there the yeti jumped up and smacked down on the ground. ¨Thanks¨ said the yeti ¨no problem¨ ¨you are the kindest human in the galaxy¨ ¨no problem¨ ¨bye yeti¨ ¨bye¨.

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you put great detail in your story.
    Did you know there was a lot of great expression.
    Next time, you could make it longer.
    Why did you pick that title?

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