Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, September 19, 2018
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Wow! Pretty cool. What will happen next? Mum x
ReplyDeletegood job billy that so cool but how did you do that
ReplyDeleteHi Billythis is Kadynyour animation was really interesting. Maybe you could add some more Pokemon around Eevee. Maybe you could add some more footage of the guy who went to sleep.
ReplyDeleteHi Billy, I liked the part when you flew down in the hot air balloon and captured Eevee. Maybe you could check the spelling. You could do not as much mean whiles.
ReplyDeletenice work billy, my favorite part was when the guy go's to sleep. next time you could talk about what happens to the other eeveelushions. all good though well done!
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