Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 5, 2019
😁What is a supermoon?😎
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I Billy I like the detale you put in to this and maby you could put more info about the Biteable. you put lots of efort into it but good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Bill i like the detail you put in this it is amazing
ReplyDeleteDon't call me Bill You know that I like Billy >:(
DeleteKia Ora Billy
ReplyDelete1.I like how you put a lot of detail and described how a super moon is made, and how you did a Biteable and not many people do them.
2.Next time you could put more writing down the bottom on how you made the Biteable.
3.Did you think about more ways of presenting this because you have a lot of Biteables.
From Zoe.W
Thanks I will think about doing it a nother way next time.
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