Have you written a poem before? For this Summer Learning Journey activity, we had to make a poem on what we would be feeling if we were on the moon. But for now good day bye
Thursday, December 19, 2019
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Hi Billy,
ReplyDeleteWoah Billy, this looks exceptional. I love your choice in background. The rocket and the Earth really tie together nicely with the poem and I also like how you touched on the old adage “to the moon and back”. That’s a very cool way to finish. I love a good rhyme and you have done brilliantly.
Do you want to go to space one day? Lots of billionaires are trying to build hotels in the Earth’s orbit. How cool would it be to go on an outerworld vacation? What are some things you would do if you went into space?
Had you thought about using a different font colour to really make your post stand out? The pink runs into the red rocket just a little bit.
Happy blogging,
Shannon (SLJ)
Thank you I made that background with help from my sister Gaia well bye bye!
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