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It's lockdown again! Here is a blog post about this task in literacy we had to write 3 paragraphs about someone that we wanted to give a gift to. I chose my mum because of everything she has done for us. You will see what I mean when you read it. Anyway stay safe everyone and let's keep Covid out of the south island! BYE!
[Also If you are wondering my dad is still alive and is like his old self!]
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Hello Billy. Its your favourite cousin in the whole entire WORLD! Honey is here! I really like how you chose your mum because our mums do such amazing work and If I did have money too I would probably give her a holiday too. Janey is amazing and I think that she deserves to go to Hawaii too. I really don't know if there is anything to improve on but are you aloud to add colour? Like to the background are you aloud to change it to more colourful and eye catching?
ReplyDeleteAmazing work Billy and I'm looking forward to seeing you next math meet and probably seeing the old man on the book too ;).
-Honey
Lol thank for the comment!
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ReplyDeleteNaw! Thanks Billy!! I hope you come with me so we can visit the Jurassic World sites! Would you Scuba dive with me too! I did a pretty scary dive there with Helly years ago! Such a cool place!
ReplyDeleteId LOVE TO COME!!! It would be so cool! Id love to go scuba diving!
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