Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, January 16, 2020
The 130-story Treehouse
Have you read the Treehouse books? Well another task from the summer learning journey was to choose a book of any chose and I chose the treehouse books I loved doing this I can't wat to do this again but for now good day.
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Kia Ora Billy,
ReplyDeleteYou’ve designed an incredible cover for The 130-Storey Treehouse. It looks incredible and I like how you have displayed the title, author, and illustrator so predominantly on the front page. I also really like your inclusion of such a bright and vivid colour as well as your chosen graphics. DId you make those yourself? Which program did you use?
I saw your post about the 39 Storey Treehouse, what makes the 130-Storey Treehouse different? What other rooms does it include, and what are your favourite spaces in the hutt?
Have you considered adding a blurb to your post to tell your readers what the novel is about? Perhaps you could increase Mr Griffiths fan base!
Happy blogging!
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon (SLJ)