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Tuesday, January 14, 2020

The 39-story Treehouse


The 39-story Treehouse another task from the summer learning journey. we had to choose a book of any choice I chose the 39-story treehouse. I will see you all next time good day.  

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Billy,

    You have done a tremendous job on this post. I particularly like slide 2 where you introduce the characters. It looks great and I like how you have included a little bit about each character under their respective picture. I also like how you have framed their subsections; it’s very aesthetically pleasing and helps your reader understand who the book is about.

    If you had a 39 storey treehouse, what activities would you put in there? I think I’d include a popcorn machine and a super long twirly slide. Did you know if you put a hessian sack on a slide and sit on it going down, you can go faster. If we did that in the treehouse, we’d definitely need a mattress at the bottom to slow your speed!

    Just be careful watching the formatting of your spaces in your blurb section specifically. Some of the words run together with a comma in the middle. Perhaps you could edit that so it’s a bit more consistent for your readers.

    Happy blogging!
    Ngā mihi maioha,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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