Today for literacy I chose to write a diary entry of an ANZAC soldier this is one of three activities I could have done well, here it is.
Thursday, April 23, 2020
Awesome ANZACs
Hi, People, this is Billy here
Today for literacy I chose to write a diary entry of an ANZAC soldier this is one of three activities I could have done well, here it is.
Now for maths, This task was like yesterdays one were we had to make medal but this time we made a war memorial here is is.
Well Bye for now
Today for literacy I chose to write a diary entry of an ANZAC soldier this is one of three activities I could have done well, here it is.
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Really enjoying your work on Anzacs Billy. This diary entry is packed full of detail from start to finish. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteWell done Billy....I really feel like I am there reading your diary entry. Your memorial is very well done. Mum x
ReplyDeleteHey Billy Well done with that memorial, excellent work! I also loved reading your diary entry. It was very descriptive and gross which is good because its a war. Well done with all your work. Your amazing and best cousin Honey ;D
ReplyDeleteYou have really considered how the soldiers were feeling. I like your use of similes throughout the piece of writing. Well done. You maths is great too, I like how you have shown the progression of your work. Mrs D
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